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I actually found this sort of offensive and rude, but I don't want to pick a fight. I suppose it was...cute...
Was it supposed to be read to he tune of Away In A Manger?
I hope so, 'cause otherwise I missed the point.
Ha ha, very amusing.
And DQ, are you possibly thinking of politicaltoons.com? Or maybe it's .org. I haven't been there in ages. My friends and I were obsessed with the site about a year after 9/11 happened and had a lot of fun with some of the songs and cartoons.
feh... I hate the term raghead...
'Ragheads' and 'head' don't rhyme, they're the same word.
What Shreik said applies to me too, lol.
Hm. This would have been hilarious if I weren't such a stiff. I smiled at the lice line, though.
Ha.
*blinks*
*tries very hard not to laugh* nice...
rock, rock on, w00t what a poem very good peice of work
i also heard a song from the internet it started like this
"bomb, bomb, bomb bomb iraq......" thats all i remember lol
You are correct , Qi. I intended for the "poem" to be a joke and nothing more;no true artistic effort went into the thing.
Hah.. quite amusing I suppose... this is most definantly more like a joke more then anything. But its good... very good-ish.
Lady
LMAO!
But ragheads and heads don't really ryme properly do they?
OOH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
I died laughng!
Did he eat the lice afterwards?
AHAHAHAHA!!!
A great relief from reality thank you friend! lol!
Quite humorous, but it doesn't feel very artfully done. Its good as a joke, but not much else.